Monday, 24 October 2016

That's my presentation about myself. (Elizaveta Belobaeva)

https://storybird.com/books/a-bit-of-me-2/?token=yn62z2s544
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  1. María José26 October 2016 at 01:22

    Hi Elizaveta,
    You wrote a really beautiful story. There are some mistakes I would like you to correct:
    - Iĺl start saying ( by saying)
    - I told ( I told you)
    - I miss so much my country ( I miss my country so much)
    - at winter ( in winter)
    - the hole day ( whole) hole= agujero
    - at last ( last, finally)
    - I'll tell ( I'll tell you)
    - someday I could travel ( I will be able to travel)
    - hope you liked it ( I hope you like it)
    Keep on working
    Mª José

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  2. María José26 October 2016 at 01:22

    Hi Elizaveta,
    You wrote a really beautiful story. There are some mistakes I would like you to correct:
    - Iĺl start saying ( by saying)
    - I told ( I told you)
    - I miss so much my country ( I miss my country so much)
    - at winter ( in winter)
    - the hole day ( whole) hole= agujero
    - at last ( last, finally)
    - I'll tell ( I'll tell you)
    - someday I could travel ( I will be able to travel)
    - hope you liked it ( I hope you like it)
    Keep on working
    Mª José

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